Congratulations! You've turned your spark of an idea into a story!

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Congratulations, you've turned your spark of an idea into a story. Your story has heart, depth, and a voice uniquely your own. A strong developmental edit will ensure that voice resonates with readers, bringing out the best in your plot, characters, and themes.

As a developmental editor, I specialize in helping authors strengthen the foundational elements of their work. Whether you're writing a sweeping fantasy epic, a spine-chilling horror novel, an edge-of-your-seat thriller, or a heartfelt contemporary drama, I'll partner with you to shape your manuscript while respecting your creative vision.

My approach focuses on providing constructive, actionable feedback tailored to each author's goals

WHAT YOU RECEIVE

I provide comprehensive developmental feedback focused on bringing out the best in your manuscript. Your detailed evaluation includes:

Plot & Pacing Analysis: An in-depth look at your story's structure, stakes, and momentum. I'll examine whether your events captivate readers and if the rhythm propels the narrative forward effectively.
Character Development: A thorough assessment of your characters' arcs, motivations, and emotional resonance. I'll explore how to make your cast compelling and ensure your protagonist drives the story.
World-Building Evaluation: Whether you're crafting a fantasy realm or a contemporary setting, I'll analyze how effectively your physical and cultural environment immerses readers in your story's world.
Writing Style & Voice: An examination of your narrative voice, focusing on consistency, authenticity, and flow. I'll help ensure your writing style enhances your story's tone and keeps readers engaged.

Your feedback will be delivered as:

A detailed editorial letter (4-10 pages) as well as in-line commentary.
Clear examples and actionable suggestions for revision.
Thoughtful questions to spark deeper exploration of your story.
Optional follow-up consultation to discuss feedback and brainstorm solutions

Please note: This service focuses on big-picture storytelling elements and does not include line editing or proofreading.

PACKAGE DEALS

All manuscripts should be 12pt, black type, double spaced, and in an easily readable font such as Times New Roman, Courier, or Arial.

BRONZE EDITING PACKAGE – [$60]

First 10 pages of your manuscript.

The beginning of your book is key to grabbing the reader’s attention, establishing setting and time, introducing the main character, and hinting at a dramatic situation or conflict. You will receive detailed notes on how to improve your introduction.

SILVER EDITING PACKAGE – [$120]

First 50 pages of your manuscript.

With this number of pages, the inciting incident should have occurred, and the plot should be well underway. Does the story have an engaging hook? Are you telling instead of showing? Any shifts in POV?

GOLD EDITING PACKAGE – [$195]

First 100 pages of your manuscript.

Within the first hundred pages, the reader should be fully invested in the storyline and cast, and the protagonist should be struggling to determine how the conflict will be solved. Do the characters have depth? Is there a lack of beats for pacing and description? Is there enough conflict?

PLATINUM EDITING PACKAGE – [$350]

Full manuscript (up to 80,000 words)

I will provide an editorial letter giving you an overview of your writing voice, setting and storyworld, secondary characters, and overall strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript. For manuscripts over 80k, additional fees will apply.

DISCLAIMERS

Copyright is always yours. I will respect the confidentiality of your work as well as your legal claim over it.
Writing is subjective. Me loving your work does not guarantee others will too.
My editing services cannot guarantee representation, publication, or sales.
If for some reason I feel that I am not a good fit for your manuscript, I reserve the right to decline my services.
Refund Policy: If you are unable to send your work in time, you are eligible for a 50% refund within the first 30 days of booking.
All payments made via PayPal. Work begins when the payment is received.

LET’S GET STARTED

If interested, send an email to storyteller.kasse@gmail.com, with the subject/title of the email as ‘Developmental Editing Package’

In the email, include a brief synopsis of your manuscript, and the editing package you are interested in. My specialties are fantasy, science-fiction, thriller, and romance. However, I am open to other genres.

I look forward to helping make your manuscript the best it can be.